Which of those would you prefer?

The effect was instantaneous. Students who had been staring at the original scan for weeks, feeling the familiar dread of the gray blur, opened the repack. A girl named Priya, who had been on the verge of dropping the major, saw Theorem 3.7 (The Intermediate Value Property for Derivatives) laid out in pristine clarity, its proof tree branching elegantly in the sidebar. For the first time, she saw the shape of the argument, not just the noise.

If you’d like, I can: